IELTS writing task 1-13

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Model answer 1

The bar chart shows the unemployment rates among women in the countries that make up the United Kingdom, both in 2013 and in 2014. There has generally been a small decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014, except in Scotland.

In 2013, 5.6% of women in Northern Ireland were unemployed. The only country with a smaller percentage of women unemployed was Wales, with a rate of 5.4%. Both countries saw a decrease in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 4.6% and in Wales it fell to 5%.

England had the greatest percentage of unemployed women in 2013, with 6.8%. However, this decreased by 0.3% in 2014. Lastly, Scotland was the only country which had an increasing percentage of unemployed women. In 2013, it had 6.1% of women out of work. This increased to 6.7% in 2014, making it the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.

Band score 8

Model answer 2

The bar graph illustrates female unemployment rates in each country of the Great Britain in year 2013 and 2014.

Overall in the figure, the pinnacle point of unemployment was made by women from England with 6.8% in year 2013 whereas the lowest point was made by female in Northern Ireland with 4.6% in year 2014.

Firstly in the figure, it shows that among all countries England was at apex point in terms of unemployment with 6.8% and 6.5% in year 2013 and 2014 respectively. Secondly, following same trend in Wales and in Northern Ireland the unemployment female rate was steadily decreased with 0.4% and 1% respectively.

Likewise, among all countries Northern Ireland female rate was negative which represents development of country. On the contrary, Unemployment rate of women was increased in Scotland with 0.6% in year 2014.

To sum up, all three countries except Scotland moves in the way of development with certain percentage in a year.

Band score 7.5