Wednesday, August 5, 2015

IELTS writing task 1-9

 The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Write at least 150 words.


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Model answer 1
The graph shows the changes and a decline overall in the share price of Outokumpu in a five-year period from January 2006 through December 2010.
At the beginning of this period the share price was at EUR 13 per share. There were several fluctuations until late 2006 when there was a sudden increase from EUR 21 to EUR 31. This higher price did not last long, however, and it fell before rising strongly again in 2008. From mid-2008 there was a sharp downward trend through the end of the year when it fell to the lowest point in this period at just over EUR 7 per share. After that the share price recovered and, despite some fluctuations, continued to rise until it reached a peak of EUR 17 in early 2010. Until late 2010 the trend was downward again, ending the year at just over EUR 12.
Outokumpu made significant gains and losses during this period but overall lost around EUR 1 per share.
Band score 8

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Model answer 2
The picture represents the fluctuations in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between the time intervals of 5 years from January 2006 to December 2010.

Overall in the figure, between 2006- 2007 the share price of the companies was at the pinnacle point about 31 euros per share. On the other hand, the lowest price of share was in year between 2008 and 2009 with the price about 7 euros.

In the starting year the market share price had drastic increment from about 12 euros to 31 euros between a year. Afterwards it gradually decreased reaching its value 21.on the same year it hiked to the second acme point with price of 30. In year between 2008 and 2009 rate of share soared to the lowest price. Then till 2010 there is fluctuation in price. Minimum rate is more than four times less than that of maximum.

In conclusion, Midyear of 2006-2007 and 2007-2008 Outokumpu companies share was sky rocketed whereas year 2008-2009 have lost value with maximum amount.

Band score 7.5

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