IELTS Writing Task 1-7

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Model answer 1

The line graph shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited certain Brighton attractions between 1980 and 2010. We can see that in 1980 and in 2010 the favourite attractions were the pavilion and the festival. In 1980 the least popular attraction was the pier but in 2010 this changed and the art gallery was the least popular.

During the 1980s and 1990s there was a sharp increase in visitors to the pavilion from 28% to 48% and then the percentage gradually went down to 31% in 2010. The trend for the art gallery was similar to the pavilion. Visitors increased rapidly from 22% to 37% from 1980 to 1985 then gradually decreased to less than 10% over the next twenty-five years. The number of tourists who visited the Brighton Festival fluctuated slightly but in general remained steady at about 25%. Visitors to the pier also fluctuated from 1980 to 2000 then rose significantly from 12% to 22% between 2000 and 2010.

Band score 8.5

Model answer 2

The picture depicts the percentage of visitors to Britain who travelled for four different variety of attractions (Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier and Festival) in Brighton from year 1980 to 2010.

Overall in the figure the highest point was in 1995 made by visitor in order to view pavilion with nearly49% whereas the minimum amount of tourist visit in year 2010 for the purpose of experiencing Art with below 10%.Likewise the plateau had formed from year 2000 to 2010 with28% of visitors.

For engaging in Art gallery there was drastic increment from 1980 to 1985 then it  slumped to 20% after it reached below 10% in 2010.Likewise In pavilion sector the number hiked till pinnacle after onwards it plummet to 31%.. in context of pier there was a sparse fluctuation  whereas for Festival purpose the visitors number hovers between 20% to 30%.

In summary, among all choices Visitor visited for the purpose of festival in england in between 30 years.

Band score 7.5